All Comments on 'Starting Over'

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SouthernSamanthaSouthernSamanthaover 8 years ago

Too short. It was just getting good! Please write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Build up

This is just a scene, build the story more in all aspects.

motordaddymotordaddyover 8 years ago
This one has to

have more chapters to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Short and to the point. Defently needs more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
"Daddy" a-fucking-gain

No father calls himself as "Daddy" when talking to an eighteen or more years old daughter. Fucking ludicrous. The fact that you gave her DD breasts gives away the fact that you are probably too young to be here.

SorchakSorchakover 8 years ago
Taylor, aka 'Daddy'

didn't call himself Daddy. Only his daughter did. And my daughter, although only 14, already wears E cup bras. It's perfectly realistic. This story was short, and to the point. I give it four stars.

tamashi310tamashi310over 8 years ago
"Anonymous" a-fucking-gain

Don't we all just love them? Always quick to talk shit but to much of a biatch to be a member and have someone return the favor.. Lol.

Anyway, excellent build up ExGirl, keep it up, I for one enjoy your posts. 🤘🏽

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
OMG..What am amazing start

How could her Dad stay on the road. I am so hard.

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