All Comments on 'State of Mind'

by Dingus Guy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good

Story was over all good. There were parts where it got slightly confusing, and it could have been a bit more descriptive. Overall, a strange/interesting plot and story. Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Well Crafted

A well thought out story beautifully put together. Well done Dingus Guy. A good portrayal of fiction that could so easily be fact.

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