All Comments on 'Status Ch. 00: Intro'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Maybe in Sci/fi?

Maybe on another planet? Or in the comic books? Bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Okay, its not erotic.

But what is it?

TheDragonsMaidenTheDragonsMaidenalmost 8 years agoAuthor
:(

Seems like this story isn't a hit. Hopefully as the story continues it will win you over! As of now, though, Possessions is what I am actively working on! :)

Just so everyone knows, my Facebook page is up! There I have sneak peeks of Chapters not yet published, family trees, and maps. :) I am also quicker to respond to questions and messages there! Please, hop on over and give me a Like!

https://www.facebook.com/TheDragonsMaiden/

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Maybe if you changed the category...

Ok, so its not erotic now but I've read others were the sex came into play in 3+ chapters. I like what you have so far and I like it, its giving us a different view of the the world in Possessions. Don't be discourage for the lack of response.

I hope you update soon.

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 5 years ago
Excellent Beginning!

I would very much like to know what happens next. This has terrific potential. Your imagery is crisp and clear, vividly bringing the scene alive. I vote you write more! Pretty please?

P.S. I think you meant thought in the last line, not though. A little earlier, I noticed scull, when skull was intended.

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