All Comments on 'Stepmother's Needs'

What's with all the &'s, there's a perfectly normal word for it in english: 'and'. Try replacing all the ampersands with and, that will improve readability a lot.

Keep it going

She said she was going out later that night & that she had dressed up to see what you thought of her.

Would have rated it higher if there were parts 2, 3, & 4.