All Comments on 'Stocks'

I liked the concept of this, and although she liked it, non con is the correct category.

I hope you publish her revenge

I enjoyed this and I hope you will bring us more of this young lass's story - if you are not pilloried for getting your title wrong! Good work!

I want to hear more about how she adapts after her stint in the pillory. (Sorry, but what is described is a pillory. Stocks are for the feet.) I especially want to hear about her next sexual escapade, and how she get's even with Becky

Where is her revenge story?

Really bad spelling.

Liked the premise, the setting and the era.

You have a good way with detail and descriptions yet gloss over parts that could be exceedingly hot.

I.e.,..."over on top of a man and shoved his cock into my rear. It was excruciating at first but then the pressure started and then another man entered me on top and in ways I felt even fuller than when the Colonel was within me. At all times a cock was"..

You go into this great description of them opening your petals and yet they "shove" a cock in your rear. Being taken like this is total violation WITHOUT the shoving. Preparing her backhole with fingers and grease would have made it interesting and titilating, as well as her embarrassment of what's going on in her mind.

Keep writing. Get an editor. Use your good skill of being able to describe what is going on in the characters's minds.

Just awful.