All Comments on 'Stolen Moments'

I feel like I've read this before.

A lot to put it mildly. There's not any descriptors, have no idea why this is in interracial, there's no back story other than one's married, one's not and they've been having sex for 7 months. This has a decent idea, but there's no story. No plot, no visualization, not even anything to call it a stroke piece. At least there's not a lot of gramatical errors, which is the only good thing about this.

Is this a story? An essay? There really isn't much to engage. Usually pieces this short, would pack a punch and be considered compelling. But this like a begging paragraph. Will there be more?

This feels familiar but I could be wrong since there wasn't much to work with.

Can't wait to read more!

I've read a story like this before on Lit!!

is that a black woman with a white man? or a white woman with a black man? i hope it's a black woman lord knows i only read those ones buuuuut i don't know.... this isn't teling me annnnnd yeah i want to know by chapter 2 or i'm stopping here well i'm stopping here if it's not a black woman anyways so yeah chapter 2 please and thank you.

i read the tags black woman hispanic man? i'm in love already, please continue.

I enjoyed reading this and although I detest cheaters, this story has my attention. I really hope she meet someone else. I really believe that once you help break up a home,you will always have to watch your back--Ms Karma is just waiting...

I take it she is black from what I read, and although no clues are given to what his race is I did pick up on how possessive he is (he sees her as his), how he wears his wedding ring when sexing his lover (could care less about her, his wife, his vows), and how he never calls her name (at least call my real name once so I know you are aware of who you are with).

Really hoping she does leave him, of course she will be tempted to return, but she forgives herself for her part in the affair and meet someone else.

Your're off to a great start. Please continue. Please finish Lover Letter too