by thinkpub
Really nice start can't wait to see what other fun things his new Mistress does to him
I'm not a BDSM aficionado, but I would rather there was more interaction between Anna and Tony and less focus on the logistics of his predicament which is restated a lot. For example, she could have brought him right to the edge of orgasm, and then crushed it over and over gain, making him ache for more of her special touch. She should also have a slightly dangerous side, so there was more fear and excitement as he tries to decide on whether to go over to her place or not. Its also a fantasy, so you can invent whatever you want for her to use on him, it does not have to technically exist today. You might take a peak at The Toymaker by HandsInTheDark. I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
This was great as is. You did a super job establishing the circumstances and the characters with sexy times, too. There isn't a need to make her scary or to make him fearful. Plenty of us would love to see the control without the nasty baggage of fear. Would you, could you be the author of positive femdom?
I hope in the next part she edges him into insanity then milks him dry through forced orgasms and post-orgasm cock torture. He wants to cum after all, doesn't he? Sometimes the need to cum gets you in trouble and with unexpected results. lol
What a lovely beginning to a series. Please continue as I too am looking forward to reading more of the story.
Really hot story. Can't wait to read what Anna has in store for him.
I really enjoyed this story. It is very well written and keeps me wanting to know what happens next. Looking forward to many more episodes hopefully.
I really hope you write more to this story. I love how he got himself into the situation and obviously loves the torment but he has no control now. Really want to know what happens after he gets to her apartment. Does she give him relief or make him work for a long time to earn it?
Great start of a story i would love to read more on how she uses him!
Put myself in this type of situation just before my new wife arrived from work, spread-eagled and nude with a ball gag to boot. I had hoped that she would be open to playing along with my fantasy. When she found me she became enraged and started yelling at me. She took her coat and keys and stormed out of the house and left me in this state for over 2 hours before returning.
When she returned she took the opportunity to do all of the talking telling me that I had a dirty mind, and that if I wanted to stay married to her I would never do anything like this again. She told me to think about what she had said and she would return in a little while to remove the gag and hear my answer. Stating that she hoped I would learn a lesson from spending a while in the disgusting predicament I had put myself into.
She was right, I was totally embarrassed, and begged her to forgive me. I could barely move when she finally released me. We are still married, but my personal memories of that event are like a double edged sword.
This has encouraged me to write of my experiences. I’ve had a few “accidental” sessions in which I have been caught.
I’d love to try the old key in the ice cube trick.
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It is a story that would be great for a first chapter of a longer series.
Oh my gosh. You should have written more chapters on this. After he finally got free (either by himself or with Anna's help), he is completely controlled by Anna. She gets to control when (or if) he orgasms. Could be that they develop feelings for each other but until then she controls what he does. She sends him to work with the cage on. Maybe gets another cage that has a shock setting, vibration setting, and a GPS unit. Eventually she takes him outside and sets him up in some humiliation bondage (maybe gets caught by the police but only to be used). She gets off big time. Maybe she brings over some GFs to use him but he has a blindfold on. Oh so much fun to be had here.
sorry you have to read this moderation team, but OCD says I have to write and post this
good writing, not my kind of story though. wishing I hadn't read it, because now my twisted mind (everyone is a bit twisted, but sometimes I am scared of what I come up with) thought up a plan for just how to retake control (essentially tie her up in her sleep and orgasm torture, with some mind games in the form of russian roulette with a airsoft/bb replica revolver)
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I quite enjoyed this tale. Being a dominant male, I don't do self bondage and never wanted to. But for some reason, this story just tickled my fancy, so to speak. I can imagine my wife wanting some sort of fun 'revenge' (our power exchange is totally consensual between us and our submissive girlfriend), but I know it wouldn't last this long and she'd want to be tied up herself quick smart--the games we play.
Well done, I'm glad you didn't drag it out beyond the ending, that's where some erotic authors make their big mistake of carrying it on and making it more and more absurd. But please, make more stories nonetheless.
Good premise.
But needed more teasing.
Too fast to start the pussy eating and rimming. Needed her to tell him -- before she made him do it -- what she was going to have him do, And for how long. And what ir was that would get her to release him form his self-imposed bondage dilemma.
Needed her to ask him how he'd like to lick her. Did he think he could do a good job? Satisfy her?
Three stars.
Here's how poor it really is ...ok ? ..He has thought of everything to make his self bondage foolproof ??? ... Thats rubbish ...He only had to have the key in the ice on a string & tie it to his wrist restraint. It could have rolled off the bed as he said ... but it would have been easy to get back for release !!! .. even if he had to let the ice melt first ? .. for all the precautions he took at the start of his planned day of self bondage .. this mishap was totally avoidable.. His ball gag would have been in place too to complete the scene ! ..
Nice. Minus one for the oral/anal scene. She had no reason to be clean, so that’s disgusting.
Hot, but my hangup is the noncosentual chastity which is basically as bad as rape. At least in my opinion.
Nice story, normally 5 stars. But like so often nowadays, it is ruined by chastityshit, so only 4 stars..... yet.