All Comments on 'Stranger in the Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good work for a first story!

Nicely written and well-paced with a pleasing twist at the end. Hope to see more soon!

CindersglasslipperCindersglasslipperover 19 years ago
ahh to be Shelly

Tina

great!!! i loved it, had me dreaming to be Shelly to have a Hal and to know a Jeff. i cant wait to read more from you..

Jay

the_seekerthe_seekerover 19 years ago
Shelly is quite the tart... ;<)

Hi,

I liked the sotry and the writing a lot.

Thanks for sharing it with us...

Th Seeker

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Liked the ending but sure hope she doesn't get a

STD. I cuoldnt imagine havin a waife who did that. But I sure wish I'd be the guy who fucked her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
HOT!!! Story

Hard, fast and dirty with a nice twist at the end. Just the way I like them. Keep writing.

Mike

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very Hot

I read all your stories today and liked them all, but this is the hottest.

Anonymous
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