by tinatart
Nicely written and well-paced with a pleasing twist at the end. Hope to see more soon!
Tina
great!!! i loved it, had me dreaming to be Shelly to have a Hal and to know a Jeff. i cant wait to read more from you..
Jay
Hi,
I liked the sotry and the writing a lot.
Thanks for sharing it with us...
Th Seeker
STD. I cuoldnt imagine havin a waife who did that. But I sure wish I'd be the guy who fucked her.
Hard, fast and dirty with a nice twist at the end. Just the way I like them. Keep writing.
Mike
I read all your stories today and liked them all, but this is the hottest.