All Comments on 'Strangers in an Elevator'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fantastic

I can not wait till the next story.

tipofyourtonguetipofyourtongueabout 17 years ago
Hmmm

"I almost came right away!"

Uninspiring. Entirely fantastical and for me, the action's hotter when it's based on reality.

Speaking of which, for them being stuck in an elevator for an hour, they sure didn't do much.

JeffCobra2000JeffCobra2000about 17 years ago
Throoooobbb!

Mm... very well done. I live the bit where the protagonist ends up being her dentist. I wonder if he still smelling like strawberries when he produced his instrument?? Very well done - I'm throbbing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Lingual skills

You know what the French for a dentist's drill is? That's right, a "strawberry"...

angelx602angelx602over 13 years ago
dental work

I loved this story, it had the right build up and the ending made us want more.

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