All Comments on 'Strawberry - A Shanghai Girl in America Ch. 01'

I love your "voice." This latest story of yours was a wonderful experience.

So glad you kept writing, you have a really fun style!

I loved how you infused Chinese into the story and even left a small list of words. It really made it feel so authentic, from the restaurant, to their kisses and sex. I did not expect the ending with both guys, though. I really did feel for her!

Love how you wrote it. I hope to read more like this or maybe even more chapters. An easy 5. :)

seriously love your writing

i'm looking forward to more of your stories :)

Thanks so much all of you for the feedback (and the compliments). It`s a wonderful way to start the day when you get such nice comments. I`m also thinking of a sequel to `Strawberry`s Halloween` - working title is `Strawberry`s Sundae` - if you`d like to see that, let me know and I`ll write it.

If you like this story and you haven`t read any of mine before, I have a few more posted (just check my profile). There`s also a couple more on the way (a very sad one called `Because You Were My Youth` and another I`m calling `Chinese Takeout`. And of course I am working on the next couple of chapters of `Hayley`s Party`.

Thanks for the language lesson! And again what a hot and great story! I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it!

Chloe, this was fei chang hao (Very good)! haha

As a laowai/gwailo/yangguizi who has lived in Greater China for 34 years I love how you have incorporated Chinese into the story, My ji ba/di ke enjoyed it too

Thankyou so much :) - and StrawberryCh. 04 ("Strawberry Under the Mistletoe - Part I - "I'll Keep You Warm") should be up on LIT for next weekend (Sept 10th). It started as a single story about Strawberry going to Alan's family home for Christmas but just grew. Started on Strawberry Ch. 05 (Under the Mistletoe - Part II - "Dim Sum in Duluth") as well, but that'll take a bit longer.

For those who have a need for some quick action I highly recommend this one. This story still has good character development. It has a great drawn out sex scene that feels real. I think Chloe is possibly one of the most expressive writers on this site consistently dealing with a young girls sexuality and her conflicting emotions.

I visit Hangzhou yearly and love the people and food!

Why the need to constantly denigrate Asian guys in your stories? As a 6ft tall "hunky" white guy self-loathing women are a huge turn-off.

Your stories are the best! You make me push my fantasies further. Love how you have different twist and turns. Always been a fantasy of mine to fuck another’s woman and keep her panties! Such a good start to the series. Mike

Loved the twist. Great story.

Hooked

You just keep getting better, Chloe! Your writing, that is! Though I'm sure it applies to your other talents!

Very good story. I think I'll enjoy the rest of the series.

Very creative translation and interpretation of the Chinese.

Chī bīng qílín -- "Suck cock" -- lit. "eat icecream"

Xiǎo bī - "Little pussy"

gàn - do it

cào - fuck

Wǒ tā mā de -- "Fuck me hard"

Wǒ tā mā de yìng -- "Fuck my cunt"

Di diao -- "big dick/cock"

Shèjīng -- lit. "Shoot sperm" -- ejaculate / come

Shensheng de gaowan -- "Holy testicles"