All Comments on 'Stray Kitty'

this is lesb story 1*

still cheating.

a willing cuckold story i think should be in the gay male section though.

just my opinion

For the skinny idiot that thinks if you don't like something and say so... that tbey need to impose their tastless style of writing and declare you're a fat anything that "cums" in their brainless void.

This story is worthless and when compared to well written stories by good authors, falls far shorter than a 1 expresses.... but even with a negative scale abuses of the system would occur. So folks will always comment and try to make everyone believe that they know better than abyone else what is good for everyone..

Didn't Hitler have an idea along those lines at some time in history? How'd that turn out?

That's how.

If you had finished this story, you might have received decent grades. Why hasn't wifey challenged Ben on his cheating for 6 years? Did Charlie cheat in response or did she start the double cheating routine? Why stay with a cheating hubby who apparently does not satisfy his wife anyway?

If Ben is out fucking then how is he back at the house? Or is this some kind of role play where Ben pretends he is fucking around so his wife can fuck her girl friend while he watches? But then why would she close the door and lock it? Apparently she wants privacy with her Lesbian lover, but doesn't need to hide it from her husband? I'm so confused. Why does he fuck around only every other Tuesday?

I got lost in the beginning. When Ben left how did she get to amber. Was she next door. Poor writing.

Was there a story?

You should think about a part two. Thanks for sharing,

Is this a story? Who are these people? Is the lover girl an Amazon? To "push him out and shut and lock the door of his own bedroom", it's the only explanation. This is like verbalize the verb cheat: He cheats, she cheats, they cheated! 1*

It would really help if your female protagonist had a conventionally feminine name. I believe Charlie and Amber are having a lesbian go, but looking at the other comments, I'm not the only one confounded. You're onto something, but is it what you meant?

Otherwise perfect. One and done, thankfully.

Agree with OBS, pretty slack effort.

If her endgame was a divorce then she won. I wonder if Charlie's wife or girlfriend was happy when she found out? Or if Charlie simply got mugged one night by an unknown assailant and lost his testicles? Stupid story. No real plot and completely un-ended.