All Comments on 'Struggles of an Everyman'

I loved your story!

Well-written overall, I loved the way the story developed (with some unexpected twists), the reaction of the characters, the style,...

How you described trying to fight seduction, then dealing with the consequences, how everything turned out, the details you described,...

While the plot developed there were a lot of possible storylines and outcomes and that kept it open and interesting to the end.

Very much looking forward to a sequel! :)