All Comments on 'Stud Ch. 01'

The moving the story from the present to the past and back again was easy to understand but you should have done a better job of defining the difference not just running them straight into one another. It was like when you are watching a tv show and then realising that the adverts are on. You could have, for example, done one in normal type and the other in heavy type of italic. Perhaps if you had put a line between them or a sub heading? That’s my only criticism. It’s well written and I look forward to the next chapter.

Agree with first comments.

I've been reading this story over and over again. For me it was the best of 2018. Thanks for sharing it!