All Comments on 'Student Teaching Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I don't know...

I always find these bbc stories borderline racist. The black guy always seems a little on the slow side and the white woman always has some sort of epiphany about all she's been missing by not having a huge cock stuck up her.

These stories never seem to vary.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Should Have Stopped in 2011

No wife! Interracial at best. Formulaic garbage. Gee the bbc syndrome What a pile of tripe

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sorry

didn't do it for me 1*for trying

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Sorry but this sucks and so does she. I fucking hate women that act like they're are all moral and they are worse then the men. What a fucking slut! You need to have a little balance in this story if you want anybody to read it. Maybe tell a chapter from the fiance's point of view. Or is it just all about writing about big black cocks that the author is going for. Must be a cucky closet fag!?!?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wrong Cat

Published incorrectly. Written poorly

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
NOT LW (still)

Certainly IR! Good case for Erotic Coupling, or Romance, or even Anal! Maybe First Time (with IR and Anal). She is NOT married, nor cohabiting with her FIANCÉ (she's the fiancée!)

Some men can write with SOME credibility from a female PoV. Some women can write effectively using a male PoV! Aubug is NOT one of those men! Teach, in Ch.1, has several sudden changes in her decisions which seemed out of character, if only with the rapidity of her switch. That happens several times in the current chapter, as well. Giving up her butt, and sucking Bull's 'ass finger' so readily (without prior preparation...enema) are two of those! ( I would prefer A2M play be treated like rape and under aged sex in LIT!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
what does this

tell you the sickos have favorited it as a story good luck with that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
what a fucked up story

to much fucking and now is a sex crazed slut who needs big cocks . when will this sick story end.. sex sex and more sex.. and this is engaged to a tom.kate is sliding down a path to hell and destruction.. and this author still can write this trash

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Poorly written

No substance, just a lot of strange thoughts on what erotic is suppose to be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

if Tom is lucky, he'll go find another, and she is damaged goods and he may be imperfect too, so they both may be imperfect permanently with others. And she gets knocked up and compounds her lfe experiences

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
ahe doesnt deserve

a husband. Or better yet he doesn't deserve a bitch like her. Id say tell him gently so he can have time to find a decent wife not a whore for niggers

jezzazjezzazover 10 years ago

What is the value of this story?

What does it tell that hasn't already been told multiple times on this site, and frankly, better written?

So she's a slut for black cock now. Doesn't give a shit about anyone's feelings but herself. That's awesome.

Honestly though, so what? Who cares? There's nothing here to make it interesting at all?

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