All Comments on 'SU: A Closet Exhibitionist Ch. 02'
by Hogwheels
- 5 Comments
LupusDeialmost 6 years agoThis one is good. I was dubious about the premises at first, but once past that it went very well. This needs continuation, so many possibilities. Say, someone who saw her run will eventually figure out who it was or, better yet give enough for Sasha to figure. Well, and Carlos of course, he seems to enjoy interesting games.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoYour stories leave me restless...........Keep posting new chapter............And by the way you are a awesome writer
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoBut please sort out your spelling....it gets so distracting and isn't hard to do
Soar - to soar like an eagle
Sore - I fell over and now my hands are sore
Coward - the coward ran away from protecting his friend
Cowered - because her friend ran away she cowered waiting to be attacked
They're - contraction of they are
There - over there
Their - this is their bag
Your - is this your bag
You're - contraction of you are
Other than that 5*
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoAuthor needs to learn how to spell or use "Spell Check". Cute story that could have been true.
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