All Comments on 'Submissive Cruise Ch. 03'

There is only 1 thing wrong with this submission! And that is that it is in BDSM. This was hot, a true fantasy. I got wet reading it and was devoured by every word. It captivated me and made me wanting more! This story made me loose myself in its true nature. Just like a movie in my mind, I forgot the world around me as I read it. Very adventuresome!

Thanks for writing it, and hope to read more by you.

This was a delightful read. It was a sweet and sensual story. It seems that your personal needs were quite evident. I would agree with other reviewers that it is mischaracterized as BDSM. You may get broader readership if it is listed under Romance.

This was a delightful read. It was a sweet and sensual story. It seems that your personal needs were quite evident. I would agree with other reviewers that it is mischaracterized as BDSM. You may get broader readership if it is listed under Romance.

This should be reclassified as there is nothing BDSM about this. BUT it was a very hot story.