All Comments on 'Submissive Cruise Ch. 03'

This should be reclassified as there is nothing BDSM about this. BUT it was a very hot story.

This was a delightful read. It was a sweet and sensual story. It seems that your personal needs were quite evident. I would agree with other reviewers that it is mischaracterized as BDSM. You may get broader readership if it is listed under Romance.

This was a delightful read. It was a sweet and sensual story. It seems that your personal needs were quite evident. I would agree with other reviewers that it is mischaracterized as BDSM. You may get broader readership if it is listed under Romance.

There is only 1 thing wrong with this submission! And that is that it is in BDSM. This was hot, a true fantasy. I got wet reading it and was devoured by every word. It captivated me and made me wanting more! This story made me loose myself in its true nature. Just like a movie in my mind, I forgot the world around me as I read it. Very adventuresome!

Thanks for writing it, and hope to read more by you.