All Comments on 'Sultry Beginnings'

Hot! A serious fantasy of mine. Can't wait to read more! A couple of mistakes in the writing but still extremely descriptive and juicy

Thank you. Yes, I agree it isn't polished as much as I might like in the editing but I am always happy to hear constructive criticism.

Its as if you read my diary...if I would even dare put this in it. Long time fantasy of mine but with new ideas to um...think of the next time I imagine this. Please continue.

Loved the storyline! Similar to my first experience with my first Dom! Juicy! Hot! I'm eager for the next chapter!

Thank you. Nice to see someone gets it. You transported me there with the set up and descriptions...the detail mmm so nice.

This is how reading should make you feel, if I close my eyes I am taken there with you.

Thanks! Feel free to send me any feedback if you feel there are particular parts that really grabbed you or things you wish I had developed further. It's a work in progress and ideas are welcome.

I came across this work in the random old bdsm stories.

Nothing like I expected. Just a huge turn on.

I literally started reading this at work and had to stop and savor the rest when I got home. I'm sure this story is just a one off but I would love to know what would happen when they meet at the bar.

This blindfolded meeting is so close to a long time fantasy of mine. I really appreicated the internal thoughts. It brings a level of reality to the fantasy that makes this ring true...even if most people would never dare. I loved it.

Omg...so hot