All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

It reads like a good sumary, not like a story. You rushed it way to much. You shoud revise it make it longer add a fer days of the meeting, falling in love sleeping toghether. And add a real problem for Jonathon, 'cause i dint get why he hit her, and even the most sickos have a reason.

Jonathon didn't hit Kay, it was the other worker who was trying to rob her that hit her. Just wanted to clear that up.

I have to agree that I don't understand why Jonathon hit her. I understand Andrew being all alpha male and coming to the rescue, but there was no back story to Jonathon nor explanation as to why he did it. Loved the connection between the romantic leads, however, the Jonathon twist just left me confused ... sorry ...