All Comments on 'Summer Home Delivery Ch. 02'

by PhantomOfMoonlight

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dweaver999dweaver999over 16 years ago
Well done

Very good. I hope you plan on writing more of this story. There were a few places where you could have proofed it better, but they were not overly distracking.

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