All Comments on 'Summoning the Succubi Pt. 01'

not very long and you repeated quite a bit and the tag summoning doesn't apply to the story

I can live with this being a short chapter to the start of a story, but it repeats a section halfway through. With some editing, I want to see where this goes

This is literally the first writing I have done since high school, this is basically a preview seeing what kind of feedback I'd get, thanks for taking a look. I'll be uploading the next part shortly, and hopefully it'll be better and without as much repeats

The second half is repeated