All Comments on 'Sun, Sand, Sea and ...'

Like the premise of this story. Hope you can expound on it.

But you need to continue, please.

5*

Your friend, the former PS and TEB

Nice, fun story with great characters. More please!

Well written - build up is good for a great climax.

A bit of a slow start, but you built it up well; generally well written.Try to avoid too many coincidences between the characters, though. Let's see some more with Cheryl and Cathy, maybe with others, too.

to your editor; there were no distracting typos! Please write more about these people, since there are eight more days before the ladies have to go home.

Thanks for the story. Would love to read about the rest of the 10 days.:)

Maybe the couples could swap? The oldies teach the youngsters a thing or two about sex.

usually with 1 or 2 makes you happy and smiley the rest is a gift, TK U MLJ LV NV

Definitely needs a second chapter

Agree with the others asking for more. Great story so far and well setup for further adventures,

A nice view into a world where sex is a nice thing that people can do with each other without anxiety or guilt. I wish there were more!