All Comments on 'Sunshine Cures All Ills Ch. 01'

Cheaters are cheaters, no matter if men or women...I hope these ones get what they deserve...3* for now

Dupek.

for your effort and content.

But this one has a horrifying set up. Patience.

Seems like there are any number of possibilities for revenge.

So often it's the cheating wife we're berating. Now we have a "dupek?" Not sure what that translates into but it can't be good. This is moving a little slowly. We'll see. The Mouse seems set to become the cat. No stars at this point. Wait until the conclusion to decide.

Good setup so far.

For the readers, I think generically "dupek" would translate to "asshole/arsehole" in English. "Dupa" is butt, bum, or ass.

The start can't wait to see How the "mouse" roars and what becomes of the Fab 4 .

Once you've introduced a Polish slang curse, you don't have to keep defining it every time you use it. It is always puzzling how a person this good and smart could have married a person that shallow and stupid. Makes her look just as stupid, and deserving to get cheated on if she married someone who is that blatant of a dupek.

Good start -- now nail him good!

Initially skipped this based on the early scores. Ch 2 looked interesting but its initial scores weren't enough to overcome the ch 1 scores. Ch 3, however, caught my attn., so here I am. Mouse calls her husband and/or his friends a couple of foreign names. Would have been good of the author to give us parenthetical English names the first time each was used. Why is btb used as a tag?

Enjoyed

jtwheels

I hope she has some plans for that tire iron. Cheating bastards going to get theirs.

I gave this one 5 stars. It's the 1st btb I've read from the wife's viewpoint. It's also the 1st story I've read by this author. So far, I'm really interested to see where this goes. The fab4 are shitheads. TWO MONTHS(?) and the husband is already cheating? Wow! Better be some damn good grenades in this one.

Gave it 1* for all the damn alcohol and drugs. Tired of that crap.

I sort of like it, but there's just something missing