All Comments on 'Superman Fucks Gotham Ch. 12'

It must be nice to be Superman. It's amazing that a hero such as he was at DC, mostly a glorified boy scout, can be turned into a hyper Casanova with the ability to bend women to his will. There is nothing "politically correct" about this story but, then, this is Literotica, after all. I think the story could have been a bit longer, particularly between Cassandra and Shiva. Cassandra's dominance in the battle needed some reinforcing, I think, as the conclusion with Superman fucking Shiva silly seemed to be a bit too pat in this instance (although we all knew it was going to happen, anyway). I look forward to the scenes with Talia in future chapters. I have been in lust with the character ever since her debut, drawn by the inimitable Neal Adams way back when. Take care until next time...

Roger.

im glad you added both Talia and Nyssa al ghul to the story , but felt you should have kept nyssa more to the "arrow " tv show character and had her lesbian , and have her be seduced by batgirl or cassandra instead of superman , talia would have been the better sister who they meet in this part ( my opinion only ) still great story , cant wait for more

nice to see another chapter. my only gripe is how lady shiva treats her daughter

"greatest martial artist in the world" - that was genuinely sweet. Well done.