by UnfetteredMale
The Buildup in the First Chapter, Keeping Her in the Dark; is Filled with Possibilities! The Descriptions of His Control of Her and Her Accepting is Incredibly Sexual, Erotic and Romantic! I Really Hope You Write More Chapters for We Fans, as Well as Yourself!
This is unbelievably hot! It's incredible how you continue increasing the sexual intensity between the two characters until that explosive finale. Well done!