All Comments on 'Suprising Visit Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

very very hot..wanna do it sometime?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

excellent.........write some more

spankfunforspankfunforabout 9 years ago
Intense Erotic Suspense and Orgasms!!!!

The Buildup in the First Chapter, Keeping Her in the Dark; is Filled with Possibilities! The Descriptions of His Control of Her and Her Accepting is Incredibly Sexual, Erotic and Romantic! I Really Hope You Write More Chapters for We Fans, as Well as Yourself!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is unbelievably hot! It's incredible how you continue increasing the sexual intensity between the two characters until that explosive finale. Well done!

elizalooelizalooalmost 2 years ago

Amazing! Well written, great climax - need more!

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