All Comments on 'Surprise, You're My Bitch Ch. 01'

I am really enjoying your story. I like what she is doing to him and the possibilities of where you are going with this. but your writing style makes one believe you've smoked too much of that stuff while writing. slow down a bit and you'll make more sense! also, while i've never partaken of the stuff, if he'd smoked that much weed, wouldn't he be unconscious and drooling on himself?

Good beginning, but where's the next event.

where is the second part? you have me all hot and bothered and can feel it all in what she is doing.

For fucks sake why don’t people finish the fucking

Stories ??