All Comments on 'Surrender to More Primitive Urges'

The slow transformation from virgin to a slutty woman is handled well in this story, with only a couple of instances that might be considered a bit far fetched, for example, leaving his wife alone and naked without keeping a watchful eye from a distance. Most men would have wanted to know that she was safe, even if she didn't feel it. But a good story well told.

I liked this story very much. Overall it is well written and believable. I usually don't quibble about minor grammar and spelling mistakes but sometimes something just makes me literally laugh out loud. Please find the time to edit the phrase "... braless which allowed her poultry nipples..." I sure hope you meant "pouty" or this one brings a different meaning to "chicken breast" than any I am familiar with.

It's a shame this is your only work, it's a great story that lends itself to many more.