All Comments on 'Surveilling Mary'

and pretty well written but unsure where you are going forth? Is it real or is it non-consequence or wimply worse?

I liked the setup, with the PI's report. Because you're outside the scene, just reporting, any emotion or motivation on the part of the characters has to be conveyed in the dialogue. More realistic dialogue might have made it more believable and engaged this reader more fully.

Wish the story continued. Good premise. Lots of ways the story could go - outraged husband, cuck husband, etc.