All Comments on 'Susan & Mark's Commission Ch. 01'

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this is the first story I read where the chapter ended in the middle of sex scene.

Glad you wrote this and even happier to see Ch. 01 in the title. Make Susan earn her commission with Franklin and then have her placate individually those superiors of hubby. I am sure she will also be trying to earn other commissions as well. Hopefully she confides in an associate or counselor who gets her too. The possibilities are endless and we ask you to write more and often about them. Thanks.

wow... good story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Good story... Really nice casual style.

She is a prostitute.By the way,how did hansbwl comment disappear.

This story's got all the right elements for it to turn into a first class story, I'm looking forward to what's to come (no pun intended!) Mark will get the sale I reckon, but only after his wife has fucked all the senior executives to 'oil the wheels'.

I hope chapter 2 cums quickly.

Great Story! My wife and I enjoyed it. However, we wished that wife Susan had not been drunk when she sucked cock to close the deal.

It’s always hotter, when a wife-prostitute makes the decision to spread her legs with a clear head. That way, everyone know who she is and there are no possible excuses.

My wife said, "Since Susan already enjoyed flirting with Franklin, this was not something that was forced on her against her will." My wife has done a lot more than a blow job to help out my career!

Again, good story.