All Comments on 'Swan's Song: The Birdcage Ch. 04'

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Ellienora35Ellienora35almost 11 years ago
So beautiful

I am falling a little in love with Masrters Sean and Tristan too. Something is going to go down with Pea and Raben soon. Can't wait toread about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
What a marvellous story!

I am enjoying this so very much - thank you for sharing a wonderful talent with us.

inspector123inspector123almost 11 years ago
Another good chapter ....

So sweet and lovely. Just the way I like it. Thanks for sharing!

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago

Fun, sweet and hot. The feathers are going to fly.....

Would live a bit more about all the main characters. So far everyone is happy/playful or sullen/jealous. Need more info.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedalmost 11 years ago

Loved this chapter. i agree with FA_JF i want more back story. hopefully its coming. So far the sex is hot but i need backstory :-)

redyellowgoredyellowgoalmost 11 years ago
I believe it was already asked

but not answered...how did they become slaves? Is it a complete fantasy world...ie FH by Jennyb? If not, why did they choose this? Did they choose this? Is it a term where they can leave? Where they stolen/kidnapped? Please some backround will go a long way w/the characters that you have firmly established. Perhaps and daydream to a special day remembered.

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