All Comments on 'Sweet Escape Ch. 02'

Very hot. I hope this comes from a real experience. If not lets get together and make it real. Your boat or mine?

S/V Destiny

like the general story, still waiting to be pulled right in, maybe a little more detail .. make your imagination work... it's not hard to stop writing, close your eyes and try and get a real feel for what you're putting down in words. keep it up... more please

This is a good story, but there are a number of typos. And weren't these guys headed down the Pacific Coast in the last story? That's a long, long way from Yucatan and there's a contingent between.