All Comments on 'Sweet Temptation'

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mekakymekakyover 15 years ago
awesome

great story, love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Age of Legal consent

MeThinks you should check your state's laws on consensual sex. It's different in different states as well as nation states. For instance in Ireland for fems it's 15 and for California it's 18 for fems and 14 for males.

To keep readers straight you might consider setting a state you know the laws of consensual sex or checking those laws in the state your scenes are in.

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 15 years ago
Cute

I really liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
love it!

Loved it.

Please continue writing more stories.

I wish you would continue this story.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 9 years ago
A 5 to me

I don't see the problem with a 6-year difference. Chris is certainly legal and 25 vs. 19 is nothing.

The story seemed real, like it could happen. Caleb seemed authentic and Chris's shyness also worked. How Tamara and he got together also went well, on how you built it up from introduction to consummation. I'd definitely like to see another installment. :)

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