All Comments on 'Sweetheart Succubus Ch. 01'

Great story. Love that it's not a typical story line.

You should write more. Matbe the further adventures of Melissa the Succubus.

I think this would be a nice series with these two characters. How they become a couple and the things they go through. But also you should make the sex scenes more detailed.

I love the humorous interaction between the characters! About to read Part 2. Great job! 5/5

...when you wrote that his dick was 2 1/2" around (in circumference). A quarter coin is ~3" in circumference, so his dick is smaller than a quarter... You might wanna fix that.

so C/π = 2r = diameter. So if his cock was "2.5" around" means that:

2.5" / 3.14159 = diameter of this cock (how thick it is)

This means his cock is about 3/4 of an inch thick. Which is about the size of a finger.

if 2.5" thick means that it is roughly 7 3/4" around! According to Wikipedia the average girth (circumference) is 4.85" So either way, I think you need to change some numbers because he has either a average length finger sized cock, or a average length thick monster larger than some babies heads... (ouch!)

Math aside, I really liked the story!

Keep up the good work!

What a great start!