All Comments on 'Sweetie Ch. 06'

you did a great job explaining the satisfaction a woman might receive, while she is lactating. while this goes on my dream list, along with getting pregnant; i certainly did enjoy sweetie's description of the experience. and oh, i love how nicely sweetie's figure is developing.

You made it kind of vague about whether the narrator was a girl or boy, even though this is a series. Your use of & was kind of annoying and the details were vague too.

However, you did a pretty good job overall. Keep writing and improving.