All Comments on 'Swimmer Taken Ch. 01'

Loved it, write chapter 2 soon!!!!!

more descriptin and some back door love

Your writing is like warm water. Nothing in taste, too much of it and it makes one realize how bad it is compared to good cold iced water.

The transition from reluctance to acceptance is a little too quick however!

Please continue with the lady being taken!!!!!!

SO long since you've written Elisabeth......I like the removal of all warm, fuzzy submitting-to-the-rapist CRAP that so many think is erotic. Enjoyed the fact he didn't beat on her, but between his knife and his cock forced her to reluctantly climax. Looking forward to part 2!!

Hell, Yes, write another chapter!!!!!! YOMEYO