All Comments on 'Swimmerboy Pt. 08'

Cryptic comment from dad eh ? ? ?

Thanks for this great series, still going strong with new plot and hot sex. Adding Mom is a new and fresh opening and the ladies talk to each other. Great job.

Before it jumps the shark...

Your hottest chapter yet. I keep coming back to read it again. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

...hope she's off birth control. It's only perfect to keep those championship swimmer genes in the family! How kinky would it be with all these potent loads of babymakers he's been shooting raw into Mom, his eager 18-year old sperm hooks up with one of her fertile 39-year old eggs and they breed the perfect combination of their swimmer's DNA! Do it! They can breed and entire Olympic swim team by the time they're done...

I'm glad the friends kissed and made up.

I don't understand why Naomi was in the story, or of all the women, she had a name.

There's where you ruined it all.

Well the big headed (ego wise) sex got pretty boring after the first pages. Then it got really boring after a few more episodes. By the ending I could hardly read the rest of it. In fact I skipped and skimmed. Not my cup of tea. Gave it a 3* and was generous at that.

I hope you continue this series.

Loved it!!, you seem to have extensive experience of swimming? I never could swim crawl only breaststroke however did represent my town aged 15, 67 years ago. Must be more, what about college & home visits and babies.

To bad you didn't keep it going with third dropping news of being pregnant and all and dad giving the wink of been there done that could of made a good story a great story .

I still gave you a five. I did want more though

Omg the lucky mother fucker and with her best friends too and another and daughter as well. What would I not give to gang bang all these sex crazed cunts. Cunt lapping sex maniac U.K.

Yes! Let son’s sperm meet his Mom’s egg, and then the hot, wicked Mommy-son DNA mixing can begin! 😈

8th grade biology class taught that boy and girl twins can NEVER be

Identical twins. They are always fraternal twins. You can say you look alot alike for a boy and a girl.

Well that’s a surprise ending, you have gotten better as this has gone along, still odd about the first etc. names and missing words, but I liked it at the end

I was hoping all three got pregnant and the ones married got divorced and went and lived in a 6 bedroom log cabin style place near a lake