All Comments on 'Swing Ch. 01'

good story great start, reading this you left yourself with many ways to go, all we know right now is it wasnt her last, hopefully part 2 will be just as good a read as this one was. Looking forward, you have me guessing if this was taken from real life experience or a fantasy.

Drawn by the story title they will flock to read and comment, decrying the content but spanking furiously while dreaming of being cucked, consuming creampies, smoking cocks and getting cornholed. god bless 'em

Adage is true. Husbands and boyfriends get their wives and girlfriends into swinging, but it's the woman who decides if they'll keep swinging. I think we know where joanna's leaning (haha). I smell a cuckold in the making.

Site is heavily populated with sick readers and sick authors who have this sick fantasy that "normal" husbands and wives are into making men cuckolds and wimps. Well, children, it ain't so. So, put your little peckers back into your diapers and get a life.

more closetcucks will come; they cannot resist the title or the tag. delirious with passion they will read and comment, imagining a life of cuckhood filled with cornholed cocksmoking, more will come...

excellent story - can't wait for future chapters and to see how far you let her go

Keep 'em coming!

Of course everything started disintegrating long before. Wrong category by the way, unless you assume someone in the story was married to someone else.

A classic case of 'be careful what you wish for' axiom in action . Well written wimp story. Note to self: look where they keep sambuca at liquor store and only take girlfriend to swing party that falls into 'acceptable loss' phylum.

Done that. Almost exactly like that. Talked about it, decided to do it, once it started, wanted to stop it and couldn't. Once the real part of it which is power and control is lost, next comes the arguments, the fighting, and the end. Some things are best left as fantasy. A closer to truth slice of life than most here, usually one partner or the other has reservations.

There's no way I could handle that scene, and your description brought out those emotions in me as I read. Seemed very real.

Great first submission, but remember to check your work for errors. Did you use an editor, or at least a second set of eyes to review your story?

Again, a great story and first submission. Thank you for writing it.

she is a party whore.we know story cuck slut wimp....no need for more story.....

how else will you get your jollies? seeing the title and description you are drawn like a moth to the flame "cuck story ahead, must read." pulling your pud you dream of creampies, cocksmoking and getting cornholed while using your free hand to type "don't write more!"

but you know they will write more, and you know you will read

While I appreciate this is your first story, I agree with Brujay that you should have spent time editing the story. Besides their suggestions, I feel there were a lot of improvements that could have been made such as using only one conjunction per sentence, cutting down on the length of some sentences, and not using the same word to start sentences in the same paragraph. In addition, I feel the story did not flow and it felt forced. By forced I do not mean non consensual sex; instead I mean, the story reads as though you were unsure how to say something. Since there are parts in the story that seem to read as though you struggled with it, instead of trying work it out or seek an editor, you left it thereby making the story difficult to read.

What is the matter can't you read the story and comment on it. All your comments are about other readers, so take your little pee pee and go home to mommy. If you have nothing to say about the story then keep your pie hole closed.

P.S. I did not even read the story, just the comments.

another cuck dream, another creampie eaten, no need now to read the stories to sate their cornholed needs. another comment typed one-handed, another comment from a cuck, you will keep reading and commenting cuckmaster, you cannot help yourself

another cuck dream, another creampie eaten, no need now to read the stories to sate their cornholed needs. another comment typed one-handed, another comment from a cuck, you will keep reading and commenting cuckmaster, you cannot help yourself

Talking about yourself again faggot?

you cannot stay away, the tale of the cuck draws you, controls you, makes you spank your tiny wiener, makes you dream of creampies, makes you smoke fat cocks while getting cornholed - you will be back again, you will comment again, you cannot help it for you are cuckster

you cannot stay away, the tale of the cuck draws you, controls you, makes you spank your tiny wiener, makes you dream of creampies, makes you smoke fat cocks while getting cornholed - you will be back again, you will comment again, you cannot help it for you are cuckster

Another loser writes.

Great story, can't wait for the rest.

Love reading the comments on stories like this. We actually enjoyed it but if you read our own stories you'll understand why. Although we all know how it will end, we are certainly looking forward to part 2.

Well written story. I liked the realistic reactions of the male character. Enjoyed it but would have liked a slightly less abrupt ending.

they are like catnip, calling to you, the lure of the cuck, of cuckdom, of cuckery, of becoming cuckold. it is a siren song, it leads to creampies, it leads to cuckoldry. welcome home

A good effort...look forward to seeing how this progresses...the other girl is interested....

You write about topics you obviously know NOTHING about. Swingers and swing parties DON'T PREY on people, they actually go out of the way NOT TO. It's not about getting people drunk and getting people to do things they will regret. That is how things get UGLY. Husbands can put a bullit in your head, cut your throat, or take you apart with a baseball bat just as easily two days later... only a fucking moron would do anything even close to what you wrote here. Why don't you take your time and write something, oh, I don't know, how about EROTIC?

you need to add more chapters, you need to have them come back for more partner swapping.

Who thinks he can handle swinging until the whore wife shows him the truth.

I could not handle swinging, especially when it was one sided. My wife at the time got a lot of dicks, I got no pussy. Needless to say, we're divorced. My kid lives with me.