All Comments on 'Swinging into Danger'

Interesting conclusion - can you top it? What happens? Where are her husband and friends?

What happens next??

Great plot development. More please!

Very good. Really want more of this!!!!!

I can't wait to see where this is going. I hope that wasn't the end!

I'm sorry but I could not finish reading your story. While I thought it would be hot, I found the numerous grammatical mistakes extremely distracting. I hope you take the opportunity to edit your work, or find someone to do it for you.

This is so good. we need a part 2.....

So, she went from a first time swinger having a great time with her loving husband and her best friend to being gang raped and kidnapped. I may be going out on a limb here , but I'm thinking she went from a first time swinger to a last time swinger in one night .This is just no longer believable. There is now no acceptable end to this story.

I liked the start of the story . . . but then it went off the rails. Why did her "friend" and husband leave her to this? Where did they go? Why did they do this to her? It doesn't make a lot of sense, and detracted from the enjoyment.

Where is part 2? I love to read it.