All Comments on 'Swirl'

Hope there a part 2.....

It reads like a chapter 2 or 3. It should have been about their first time.

To anon, it says it won't be about there first time, so it's not and shouldn't be or it would have. There are a plethora of stories and movies alike that the first we hear or see is not the beginning of the situation. To the author, very goos so far. Hopefully we'll get a POV from Mr.Sexy as well.

I just imagined me and my white daddy. Chile!