All Comments on 'Switch'

Short but hot! Well done!

Almost a prose poem. I loved the palpable tension you conveyed so well through very restrained language, just the most necessary of details to give the reader the feel for what is going on. It is almost claustrophobic, which I think is what the husband is feeling - on edge, unsure, yet eager and yearning for the new experience and the old, reassuring love. Looking forward to more of your work.

It is rare to find a quality story with a submissive man and dominant woman. You braid many elements of D/s -- apprehension, desire, curiosity, and above all trust -- into a taut and hot story. Excellent writing.