All Comments on 'SWTOR: The Emperor's Wrath Ch. 01'

by Aragorn256

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

A good start! First class I ever played was male sith warrior.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Looking Forward to More

Well written. I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Good start

the real question is can you create a good series out of it?

Aragorn256Aragorn256almost 7 years agoAuthor
Hi all! And thank you! :)

Hi Everyone! Author of this story posting here. :)

Thanks so much to everyone for their encouraging reviews and their votes. I would gladly encourage all forms of constructive criticism of my work since this is my first ever fic in Literotica. I've always wanted to write about the Sith warrior as I find the Jedi too goody two shoes for my liking. Some of you who are fans of star wars may find that some history behind my character actually comes from what you can find on wookiepedia canon/Legends. My second chapter is on the way so please do be patient!

I'm doing my best to work out a balance between sex scenes and plot as I don't want to drag out te story too much. I just hope that my sex scenes are good enough for you all. :X

Again, please do review if you can! Even if you feel it is good, I would love to know what is it I have done well and how I can improve the story as a writer. Your input is my gain! :)

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rip off

Straight rip off the convo for with warrior story line from Star Wars the old republic

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