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"I'm a man of courtesy so I'll go through the standard pleasantries anyway." The Grand Modd continued. "My name is Rycus Kilran. Commander of the Fifth fleet, second to the Minister of War, and of course as you've already mentioned my personal favourite: The Butcher of Coruscant."
"Well met, Grand Moff." Aaric replied stiffly, then observed something interesting. "Hmm... Something wrong with the hologram? Or is your face supposed to look like that?"
Vette snickered as she tried to stop herself from laughing out loud. Unfortunately, his jab at the Moff's looks didn't faze him one bit. "The scars? Oh they're just an old gift from a Jedi friend. I barely notice them anymore. Anyway, enough with the small talk. Its time I brief you on why you are here."
Aaric opened his mouth to interject but Kilran had beaten him to it. "Six hours ago, the Republic engaged in an illegal border skirmish on the edges of Imperial Territory. One enemy warship escaped. That warship, named the Brentaal Star, is carrying a passenger of vital strategic importance. Yours is the only vessel placed to intercept."
Aaric quirked a brow. "Is it now? If I'm not mistaken you're probably out of luck. The Black Talon is a transport ship, not a destroyer. You can't really expect a Gage-class transport to take on an enemy warship?"
Kilran chuckled. Oh how naïve this little sith was! "I don't believe you're right. Let me explain. The warship's passenger is code-named 'the general'. We don't know his identity, but the Republic believes he possesses military secrets. Our military secrets."
Aaric cursed once again. If the situation was this critical then any other admiral would have also sent in a transport in desperation. But if he had an exceptional Sith of which to use to his advantage...Shit! Then this makes this ship more viable to carry out this mission. Damn it! I have to shake him off!
"I trust the reports. The general must be captured or killed." Kilran ended with an air of finality. "Captain Orzik, the man commanding your transport, doesn't share my enthusiasm. He's disobeyed my orders to attack. Feel free to show him what the Empire does to cowards. Then commandeer his ship, find the Brentaal Star and deal with the general."
"You are asking me to hijack an imperial ship, make an unauthorised change of course to skirmish with a combat-ready vessel using said ship, a company of marines and a squadron of starfighters?" Aaric summarised with a deadpan expression. "A very enticing balance of odds, good sir. But I'm afraid I must decline. My master, Darth Baras, has strict orders for this ship to get me to Dromund Kaas with utmost speed. I believe the commands from one of such high standing as him would outrank even yours, Grand Moff."
Rycus, however, shook his head as smiled as if making light of the Sith's efforts to thwart him. "Oh, I can sympathize. But I'm sure I can convince Darth Baras to forgive a bit of tardiness. Mark my wordsApprentice. The generalwill be dead or in custody by day's end. If he's not, I assure you... your ship will never reach port. Cheerio!"
The projection cut out before Aaric could protest. Aaric breathed slowly and balled his fists as he tried to keep his temper in check. This was utter suicide! But he had no choice. Either he took the chance and tried to complete the mission, or never reaching Dromund Kaas in one piece. Suffice to say the former was a more appealing choice.
"I will lead the way to the bridge. Once Captain Orzik is deposed and our hijacking is complete, we may proceed to the Brentaal Star." The protocol droid exclaimed, much to his annoyance. He could just destroy the droid right there and then, but it was most probably bugged in order to keep tabs on their progress. Aaric turned to see Vette sporting an annoyed expression.
"Well... Shit." Aaric sighed.
"You just had to jinx it didn't you?" Vette groaned.
"Quiet, you." Aaric scoffed. "Lead the way, droid. Let's get this over with."
"Excellent." The droid beeped. "Then I will proceed."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoHi everyone,
The author will be discontinuing the story on this platform due to its restrictive guidelines.
This chapter was edited and an important scene was removed before it the moderators allowed it to be posted.
For those who want to see the continuation of this story, please read it at this area:
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See the earlier comment to know which site it is at now. A new chapter has already been posted there.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoHave to say this is the first time ever I’ve even bothered to send a review on this site since well the main purpose of it of course so I normally just do it on FanFiction.Net which if you want to reply to me there then please do so my link ID is u/5014737/ just saving myself the trouble if this site also deletes links like FanFiction.Net does.
Anyone onto this story or Erotica I should say, it’s pretty awesome! Really like that you actually maintain a excellent level of story telling and lore and what not in this even though it’s mainly supposed to be Erotica which normally I think of regularly not having to much detail of plot and lore so congrats on that! But a major question/hope I have is that you continue this not just to the end of the main story line but also the end of knights of the fallen empire and the eternal empire as I have to say that would be most interesting to see.
Oh and in regards to OPnss generally myself anyways really enjoys that and not to mention in regards of the storyline itself it’s probably for the betterment of the story anyways. And the non-consent thing well normally I don’t really enjoy or like that but given this is a Sith it can be expected so yeah guess I’m ok and don’t pay to much attention to those that completely disagree as it is after all the reality of what the Sith should essentially be like, but since Star Wars is supposed to be PG kinda makes sense they exclude that same with the Death Eaters in Harry Potter as they should be committing crimes like that but since it is PG again they can’t include even any suggestions towards it. But the reality is that it should be happening semi-regularly at least in both instances.
Pretty sure this has probably became the longest review you’ve ever seen especially on this site haha so I’ll keep this little bit short. So after saying all that there is some things which I noticed you acknowledged but I’ll still say it here, that you need to improve in. Mostly it’s just the fighting scenes, a little improvement in the sexual scenes like being longer for example in some certain instances and slightly more detailed. But other then that your grammar, spelling, lore an story has all been spot on so great jo and keep it up as this is officially the very first story series on this site I’ve actually been looking forward to. Especially in regards of Stat Wars as there is none at all that is similar to this.
