All Comments on 'Sylvia's Mom Pt. 05'

You confused Shelia sand Sylvis several times on page one in the beginning. May I ask, is English your native language? It almost appears as if you have not mastered th English language. Definitely a proofreader is on need if not an editor. With all that said I am loving this storyline. A few simple corrections could only make it better. Not quite a 5 but a solid 4

I could not help but notice you made three typographical errors in the first five words of your comment. I suppose "typo" must be your first language. :-)

Again your imagination is running on overtime, unfortunately your fingers lack a similar dexterity, can I repeat a question that was asked by a previous commentator, is the English language your native tongue? You appear to be grasping for the words at times.