All Comments on 'Symbiosis'

by Neorotoxin

Sort by:
  • 14 Comments
FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 14 years ago
wow

the content of this was wild if things like this happened it would be great keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow, just wow

that was pretty hot and sexy. never expected it. keep writing, it's good stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

yum

longforeskinslongforeskinsover 12 years ago
Great story

Very well done. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome.

Very interesting; erotic and extremely original. I loved it. (Now if only that vine would find it's way outside of MY window.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
this is the real green revolution1

this story is great, it is intresting to read how the character begins his/her change and psychologically reacts to it.

this kind of plant is something I'd like to plant on a neighbor's house, and then reap the benefits from the middle-late effects

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
one thing

If you really went to a doctor and had a unknown substance with negative effects in your system like in the story, then the doctor by law in most 1st world country's would have to quarantine your ass/call their version of the CDC and determine if your contagious or not.

otherwise a hot story.

DabblingInDarknessDabblingInDarknessabout 9 years ago
Wow

That has got to be the sexiest story I've read in forever. Love the plant sex, love the Transformation. PLEASE write more with these tropes.

Seriously, Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sad

I really thought the guy in the beginning was cool, and sort of what id like to turn out as. As it progressed to the transformation, i got really sad and pissed off that this guy so easily gave in.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome story!!!

This story deserves all the stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Story lacks something

GPS coordinates for the location of the vine.

Otherwise, I loved the story.

lilmissanonymouslilmissanonymousover 2 years ago

excellent and would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Ohhhh my god this is amazing!!!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous