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All Comments on 'Tabby Ch. 01'

by Rus_T_Knight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good job. Watch your grammar and editing. It's good, but can be better. Looking forward to your next chapters. I'd make him want her, so she asks one thing, behave! That's just me. Keep writing.

XYZ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow

Good attention to detail!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Seriously?

Did a prepubescent boy write this? Or a dirty old man?

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