All Comments on 'Taken'

This is far from Erotica. Acutally, it is just plain lust and control. To the author, why don't you get a life and stop dreaming of what you might be like in a controlling position.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters

Dear Destinie21,

Hey, I loved it. I'm a straight girl and I loved it...*grin* I think you write very erotically. This story was well-written as an erotic fantasy that was unashamedly all action and, therefore, didn't need much plot. It can be very difficult to write all action stories and keep the reader engaged. You certainly kept me engaged. I thought it was hot.

Ok, so I'm a deviant straight girl.*'nother grin*

Take care,

Moxy Irish

would luv to be both women then (depending on my mood!) must be such a turn on for someone to travel all that way to take u, then leave u wet, panting and wanting more!!! Mental note, i must arrange that...thanku destinie xxx

Nice little story. Keeps you guessing what happened before or what will come next. Liked the atmosphere of it. This is the first of your stories I read. Gotta go and read the others...