All Comments on 'Taken'

Erotic great short story, leaving you wanting to know more about these two.

I was going to pass this over b/c of the title; just blah. I saw the length and decided to give it a try, truth be told I will be looking for other stories by you and hopeful a continuation with these two. Well written, nice pace, nothing crazy or excessive, just enough power exchange, perfect.

A great first story! You skipped the 5 pages of backstory that many here include and got right to the good stuff, Thank you for that. I also love the perspective you used in writing this. I can't stand stories where there's another in the story, by writing about yourself getting creampied by Me made the story so much better. I would be happy to make that a reality with you anytime, in the meantime I look forward to your next story.

And what a happy accident. The thought of this happening makes me so wet!

Loved the story - very arousing! Nice build up with her submission to his desires and control.

Write more!

Additional stories or one and done! More, please!