All Comments on 'Taken by the Barleys'

Please continue

Didn't see that coming!!.. more please

Didn't see that one coming.....interesting that a cold heared sociopath like Elizabeth still valued the concept of mom,and also actually would care if a 'subject' was related to her. Good writing as well.

Good research! I'm English and everything added up until you said she was a 'fresher'. We dnot really have freshers here. And the dialogue was p poor. But the rest I was impressed by! Could definitely use a few more sex scenes next chapter though.

Do you plan on continuing this story? I sure do hope so.

This chapter was juicy and i hope u continue.

I do so like Elizabeth's wicked but not "evil" style.