All Comments on 'Taken in Battle Ch. 01'

I loved the beginning of this story. I hope itvcontinues to work.

Good story and nicly written. Hope to see more.

I'm hooked.

Brutal start and totally gripping! Cant wait to see more character development and where you take this. Well done. Thanks.

Great writing, I can't wait for more

Yeah, thanks so much :) Chapter two is coming along great so should be submitted soon!!! :D

Can't wait for more; great beginning. Careful with flip flopping past and present tense and give us the next chapter soon :)

I loved everything about this story and cannot wait for the next chapter.

Great start, sounds like these people mean business. I can't wait to see how you proceed. :)

This is a great start to what is going to be a highly charged erotic series..I feel it! Powerful story, violent, savage...just right for a Sunday afternoon read! Thanks!

No doubt about it being noncon! Very good start. You have us hooked. Welcome new author.

This is quite an interesting story, but there are a lot of mistakes that you should look over.

can't wait to read more, the ice men sound pretty brutal. Liking Skara, she sounds like she's pretty feisty.

Not to rush but pleased more