All Comments on 'Taking Him Ch. 03'

enjoying this story a lot and looking forward to see how it continues.

The sex, as always, is really good. I like the way it escalates to new levels of intimacy with each chapter, focusing on the characters as much as the action. What I would like to see, though, is for the non-sexual stuff to take it a little slower. In one chapter we get a lot of exposition and another subplot on top of the one we already have. It also feels a little abrupt in its introduction. Too many threads this quickly could cause them to become tangled later on. I found I liked Danny more when her intentions were less overt - now, nearly every character in the story is tied to Alex in a romantic or sexual way, which is a bit less interesting. It's still a fantastic story, I just want to see even more of these characters beyond their relation to one another.

Please continue. Great realusm in the story. Excellent so far

I liked these last three chapters. Arguably, they were moving a bit too fast. Kinda took away from the 'tease' aspect of willing the two to get into bed together but... Overall that didn't take away from my experience.

There was an actual plot, character development and some suspense. Frankly I'm more curious as to what conditions existed for her silence on the rape. If you ever read this, just consider another installment. It was rather captivating. You have a very natural writing style.